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SIS B4: Chapter 108: Radio Shack and Stairway

"Sup, Uriel," Crusher greeted Daz.

The family dinner of last night had come and gone and right now Daz was meeting up with the Titan on his sister's suggestion.

While Greg and his men had found the trace that could lead to the people behind the kidnappings, Crusher was supposedly the best person to bring with him.

Rose suspected her Ember of Clarity could prove to be exceedingly useful and he was inclined to agree.

Daz ...

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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 42: Second Attack and Massage

"All ready?" Lone asked Soph. "He went easy on you, right?"

She nodded in response. "Yup. My MP is full and I'm good to go!"

Her enthusiasm warmed his heart. He smiled and held her gauntletted hand. "Well then, let's go kill some more bats, shall we?"

Soph nodded again and then the two of them disappeared. A moment later and they were back on top of the guard tower.

Lone could immediately see the 11 corpses from just ye...

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SIS B4: Chapter 107: Crushing Problems and Streaking Fairies

"Haha, at least pretend to be looking forward to spending some time with your de facto parents."

'Ah, that's Daz's voice. He must've come to pick up Rose too. I kinda just came on habit. I should have assumed he'd do it himself since he set up this dinner,' Vanessa thought in good faith as she scratched the back of her neck.

She rounded the corner to meet up with him and Rose when she heard something a bit surprising.

<...

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SIS B4: Chapter 106: Available Titles and Stress

"So yes, I am pretty amazing."

"I can tell. I've only ever been to two places before, the place of my formation and this planet. I can't imagine how exciting it must have been to explore as much of the spectroverse as you have."

"It was never easy, but as a moving city, I do get about a bit."

Daz smiled upon hearing the gems conversing with one anot...

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SIS B4: Chapter 105: Mineral Meeting and Lacking Care

"Snakes sound adorable. Is it really true that humans tend to dislike or even fear them?" Icicle asked as Daz got out of his car and sealed it back within its key.

He nodded as he began walking towards the heart of Fort Sky: GriD CrosS. "They're pretty far removed from humans and I think every single one has at least venom in their bite. A lot of people find them creepy or dangerous."

"Humans a...

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SIS B4: Chapter 104: Catch Up and Recruitment Speech

Moving Lian'Wa'Runda was a surprisingly simple process. Daz just had to be outside of the dimension and Icicle would compact the whole place into a physical snowglobe.

The snowglobe had a net-like leather binding around it with a strap that could easily clip onto a belt. And that's exactly what Daz did.

Sadly, Icicle could only open portals in the outside world in very specific locations.

It could, however, make a portal righ...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 103: Matthew and Brilliant

A/N: I think I called the cardinal Daz beat by name at some point in the early chapters. Cardinal Sarah, I think? Yeah, uh, that was an error. She has yet to be officially addressed by name in the story until this chapter. My bad.


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"Weak and poor," Daz mumbled after he was done rifling through the pockets of the dead Truthians.

All he had found of any note was a ring he felt held some value. ...

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LTW B2: Chapter 41: Feeling Lost and Sly

[Status
Name: Lone Immortus
Sex: Male
Age: 25
Level: 238 [+34]
Rank: D
Species Foxkin
Race: Golden Foxkin
HP: 21,334/60,930 [+8,540] View Post

SIS Book 4 Chapter 102: Endearing Naivety and Explosive Anger

Lian'Wa'Runda's core went on to explain that the only way it could completely stop the storms would be by taking in all of the energy contained within them directly into itself.

A very dangerous procedure that could make it explode if it tried to contain the energy for too long.

"That's hardly an issue," Ellie said with a deep roll of the eyes. "It's not like anyone wants to live here. We can just leave when you make the storm go a...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 101: Finding Ellie and Icicle

'That's odd,' Daz thought as he neared the cause of the endless shaking.

He had crossed some sort of threshold from the looks of things because just behind him the walls, ceiling and floor were splintering from the tremors.

However, where he stood the hallway was completely unaffected, almost as if there was an invisible line that, when crossed, all strange quakes ceased entirely.

"Well, I've lost my tracking method ...

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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 40: Dozens Of Seconds and Gagging

'I'm not going to hold back. We won't be here for more than a minute or two at best. Go fuckin' wild,' Lone said telepathically when both he and Soph appeared atop the guard tower Hamish had mentioned earlier.

Soph nodded before she created a barrier beneath her to stand on and several more to surround her which she pressed against her body to maintain contact with them. She couldn't teleport with them if she di...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 100: Origins and Shaking

"Daz, okay?" Madison asked as she gazed at his near-frozen form.

He was quickly warming up but he was still covered head-to-toe in ice and snow. His skin was almost blue from the cold.

Perhaps he would have been forced the kill Lord Lit'ur with Laughing Skull if the fight had dragged on for any longer.

He smiled faintly at her, a challenge in his current condition. "Yes, thank you though. It's easy to ignore just by being nea...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 99: Surprisingly Even and Critical Error

Daz took a single step forward and said, "First, they are not my puppets. One is my future wife and the other a valued friend who I owe a lot to."

A second step and his Archreaper's Aura exploded out of him and pressed down upon Lord Lit'ur. "Second, we shall not dance, I shall walk and you shall be the ground beneath my feet. You are not my match no matter how odd you are."

Lord Lit'ur raised an eyebrow. He wasn't forced down to h...

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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 39: Dual Plans and Handholding

"So what's the plan and why can't we just sneak our way through the front door?" Lone asked. "Metaphorically. I don't actually think there's a front door. I'd bet on a gate."

He absolutely wasn't against a clever tactic to get the drop on the monsters who lingered in Urd Grun but he felt it was wise to ask why, exactly, this was necessary.

Hamish frowned and sighed. "Fair 'nuff. Ah 'avenae really teld ya what kinda powerful fecks l...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 98: Negotiations? and No Negotiations

The main entrance to the palace of ice opened on its own as if inviting them in. "That's not suspicious at all," Daz muttered.

"Little, suspicious," Madison countered.

Daz chucked a bit. "I was being sarcastic."

"From, you? Unexpected," Madison replied. "From, Rose, guaranteed."

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Plans In Response To The Poll

So the clear winner was me essentially dropped LTW to focus on SIS. I won't drop LTW, so to speak, but it won't ever get bonus chapters.

Dropping it would be too harsh considering how much time and love I've put into it, not to mention it'd be cruel to the people who only read it both on here and on RoyalRoad.

The plan is to stick to sat = SIS chapter and sun = LTW chapter but between Monday and Friday I'll focus on writing extra S...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 97: Madison's Power and Knockout Pills

Madison approached the edge of Mr Barrier's shield and then drew her longsword, Family. Daz watched on with Katy, Kathy and Ellie in fascination.

'I wonder how she'll remove the snow,' Daz thought. 'An old skill that's be improved like her Laceration or Divine Cross, or maybe she's gotten a new skill or two that's even more powerful...'

Madison's stance was firm and unyielding as if she were a mountain facing off ...

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What do you think I should do?

It should come as no surprise to anyone, really, that interest in both of my stories has fallen massively. I think my writing is pretty good but I post rarely and infrequently.

My earnings on this website too have plummeted. I can't say for certain that's due to my lack of constant updates but it probably is. I understand it.

I get barely any new traffic on RoyalRoad for either story and they are both ranked fairly poorly (LTW[R] a...

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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 38: Hypocrisy and Skill Obtained

First was Swordspear Mastery. Lone didn't really expect to get a new effect at expert rank with this skill since it had developed Pierce at Advanced.

That lack of expectation had proven to be correct, sadly.


[Passive Skill: Swordspear Mastery
A sub-skill of the skills, [Sword Mastery] and [Spear Mastery] which is critical for swordspear-users and passively allows for better handling and control ov...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 96: Strange Being and Lian'Wa'Runda

Daz frowned. He, Madison, Ellie and the twins had been walking for a good while now. 'An hour? Maybe two? Hard to tell with my reaper body and the sky being blotted out by the snow.'

Hamson was still peacefully being controlled by him outside of Mr Barrier's shield with the Frost Phoenix egg atop it. Reika was being lazy on his halo and his Survivor's Instincts were silent.

Everything was going well but something felt... o...

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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 37: Attachment and Plenty of Growth

"This is harder... than I thought it would be, in all... honesty," Lone confessed as sweat poured down his brow. He was currently locked in place by Hamish's powerful B-ranker aura.

As it turned out when someone was using their aura to completely suppress the movements of a singular individual it was actually at least five times more effective than when being used casually or in combat.

Such an application of aura control couldn't ...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 95: Cold and Cell

'Any more than this and I might actually freeze to death. I expected it to be cold but not to this degree. I have a 60% Elemental Resistance, after all. System, what even is the current temperature?' Daz asked as he made his way over to the group within Mr Barrier's protection.


[Cold Resistance has reached Level 3.]
[Cold Resistance has reached Level 4.]


He honestly wouldn't be ver...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 94: Curse and Harvesters

'Ability, longevity, clarity...' Daz stroked his chin thoughtfully. "Can you elaborate on what each means, Door?"

A few seconds passed by in silence. Clearly, he'd not be getting an answer.

"It truly was a final message, huh? You won't give me any insight, will you, system?" As expected, the all-powerful entity didn't respond either.

Daz slowly paced around the pedestal as he pondered over which to choose. "I think i...

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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 36: Skill List and Basic Hygiene

[Congratulations! the host's passive skill [Curse Resistance] has levelled up! It is now Beginner Level 6.]
[Congratulations! the host's passive skill [Curse Resistance] has levelled up! It is now Beginner Level 7.]
[Congratulations! the host's passive skill [Curse Resistance] has levelled up! It is now Beginner Level 8]
[Congratulations! the host's passive skill [Curse Resistance] has levelled up! It is now Beginner Level 9.]...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 93: Assassin and Treasure Room

Thankfully, Daz didn't have to wait the full thirty minutes he'd personally decided on. Not twenty minutes had passed until two figures entered the once blood and corpse decorated room.

'How strong does one have to be to annihilate strong healthy bodies with just their mere presence alone? It would make one hell of a frighteningly efficient crime-scene cleaner if nothing else. All I can do is move on to the final room immediately if ...

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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 35: A New Skill and Discrimination

'They... They're not from Altros? B-Both of them?' Breena's mind was a mess. "Y-You're lying."

She saw Master Lone wince a little but more surprisingly, the dwarf who had claimed to have attempted to murder him shot to his feet with a plate full of food still held in his hands.

"Ah'm nae good wae weeuns nor drama. Sort this shite oot yerself, Fox. Thanks fae answerin', though," he said before he turned his back and wandere...

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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 34: Training and Coming Clean

Patch notes: Woodworking skill has been renamed to Logging. Wood Crafting skill has been renamed to Woodworking. Prior chapters where this came up have been edited on RR.


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Lone nodded to himself as he finished setting up his and Soph's tent. Breena was the first to finish, being even quicker than the experienced adventurer Hamish, Lone noticed.

Likely due to the fact that Daisuke made her and her fell...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 92: Riddle and Qunjara

'I mostly expected a warning but the person's entire being, soul included, just exploding? Thankfully my control over Earth's souls stopped her's from outright getting destroyed but what if I didn't have said control?' Daz thought as he frowned deeply. "I can store her... remains," he said, glancing at the blood and guts that covered the glass box.

"Once we leave this place you can burn or bury her as you see fit. I'll do everyt...

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SIS Book 4 Chapter 91: Observing a Monarch and Michiru

A/N: There is some Spanish in this chapter. The translation for it is at the bottom of the chapter.


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Izumi Hara kept her silence as she watched the quiet one of the two Spanish men approach the masked individual.

She, her sister and their friends had been stuck in this dungeon for days now, too afraid to answer the question after what happened when... well, when one of them actually did.

This ne...

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LTW[R] B2: Chapter 33: Level-2 Contract and The Tunnel

"Contract magic? But ah dinnae sense ah lick ah magic on ya, Fox," the dwarf said, scepticism clouding his expression.

Lone shrugged. "I don't need any mana for my special brand of contract magic. I'll be writing out the details of our agreement here for a little bit. Don't move a muscle, okay? if you could Sophie, deal with him if he doesn't listen to me."

At his side, the armoured girl nodded seriously.

Hamish raised an eye...

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