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Stripper 2023 Thoughts

A few questions id like everyone to give me some input in regards to the Stripper 2023 comic


1 - Should the comic stay in the same Strip format?

2 - Continue with no dialogue?

3 - What are some things you would like to see in this comic?


Remember, she's your nasty girl. I cant make EVERYTHING happen, but I can do what I can

Comments

1. The Strip Format Could Be A Little Thinner. 2. Keep The Dialogue, But Add Some Color In The Characters Dialogue. 3. More Burpsโ€ฆ The Very Best Burp Face, The Stripper Can Offer To Her Customers And Clients.

Kion Harem King

1. I think the vertical format is cool but itโ€™s a little big and unwieldy. Breaking it up into more images would be easier. 2. Dialogue is fine with or without 3. More burps but I think burps belong in literally every scenario

Louie-Jr

If you keep the dialogs, could you use a bigger font?

1: 2: i would say with dialog 3: the swallows/digestion i guess

belovedskull


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