Patreon-Exclusive: Naruto's Fetish Chapter 22
Added 2023-05-07 15:42:29 +0000 UTCGood morning guys!
I meant to have this chapter out about a week or two ago, but I caught a bad case of the flu. No worries, I've made a complete recovery, and this chapter ought to be a good one!
I've been thinking about the future direction of this story. Of course, with Menma's Fetish there's going to be an alternative product, but I still see lots of future potential for this one! The previous incarnations always fizzled out around the point we're at now, but I think this version has a lot more going for it! Between the drama I've set up, the new dynamics between all of our main characters, and not to mention the introduction of new side characters like Hanabi and Ino, I see lots of things that I can do in the future!
Of course, if you have any ideas of your own, I'd love to hear them! I might even incorporate them into future chapters! Feel free to shoot me a DM here on Patreon or on Discord at BigE2955#3052!
That's enough rambling from me today; I'll let you guys enjoy! Be sure to let me know what you think!
(P.S. I had someone reach out to me recently asking if it's possible to order commissions based off of this version of Naruto's Fetish. It is! I'll probably end up posting those commissioned chapters to here, too!)
Chapter XXII
Previous chapters:
Chapter I
Chapter II
Chapter III
Chapter IV
Chapter V
Chapter VI
Chapter VII
Chapter VIII
Chapter IX
Chapter X
Chapter XI
Chapter XII
Chapter XIII
Chapter XIV
Chapter XV
Chapter XVI
Chapter XVII
Chapter XVIII
Chapter XIX
Chapter XX
Chapter XXI
Comments
I do have some plans with Hanabi and Ino. I did plan to take a more lengthy effort with her finding the 'mystery man', but honestly, there wasn't many plots that I could run that'd make sense and not simply retread things I've already done in the story. Having five lemons with Hanabi blindfolded and trying to figure out who her mystery lover is could get a little tiresome. Personally, I find more interest from Hanabi's evolving role in the harem, alongside Ino, than from the "chase" so to speak. Even if Menma's Fetish might take the driver's seat, I do intend to explore thoes dynamics, so no worries there.
BigE2955
2023-05-23 20:36:35 +0000 UTCYou make some excellent points that I will definitely take into mind!
BigE2955
2023-05-23 20:32:53 +0000 UTCI’m happy to hear that you recovered from the flu :) First I just want to say I enjoyed the chapter, you always follow through with the smut scenes! But I somewhat agree with the above comment. I’d rather get more focus on Menma’s fetish since it’s more appealing at the moment; but I also do want to see more from this work because it still has potential story beats. I too, like this setting and understand that the Uzumaki household are the bread and butter; but if possible, I would like to see more from the newly added characters (Hanabi and Ino). I don’t know what you have planned, but I thought it was a missed opportunity to show a lust-filled Hanabi going through the effort of finding the mystery man rather than telling us how she did. With all that being said, I still do look forward to updates for this story so please don’t let this discourage you from continuing it.
Food&LiquorTrack2
2023-05-13 10:05:52 +0000 UTCAizen
2023-05-11 23:30:40 +0000 UTC
