Menma's Fetish Chapter 11
Added 2024-02-01 18:29:41 +0000 UTCThis one is gonna be a doozy. I'd ramble on like I ordinarily do, but honestly, I'm too excited to have you guys read this! Give it a whirl and let me know what you think!
Chapter XI
Previous chapters:
Chapter I
Chapter II
Chapter III
Chapter IV
Chapter V
Chapter VI
Chapter VII
Chapter VIII
Chapter IX
Chapter X
Comments
Cheers, man! I plan to have the next chapter out either Late February or early in March.
BigE2955
2024-02-13 04:37:33 +0000 UTCLoved this chapter! Definitely want to see some menma stuff. When can we expect the next chapter?
Fullmetal
2024-02-12 16:20:23 +0000 UTCTrust me, if you liked this chapter you're definitely going to love what I have in store for the next one!
BigE2955
2024-02-09 03:56:42 +0000 UTCThe physical confrontation...well, it was necessary. The smut definitely makes up for IMO! Next chapter is gonna be a doozy, so stay tuned!
BigE2955
2024-02-09 03:56:22 +0000 UTCNot a bad idea, ;)
BigE2955
2024-02-09 03:55:45 +0000 UTCSorry for the late reply. Had a pretty busy week but finally got a moment to share my thoughts real quick. The smut, as always, was well done. Kushina already shines a lot on her own, but the Minato inclusion mixes really well in this story. I think that’s why I like this version of Kushina the most. In canon, we’ve been shown how close these two are; so that makes the teasing and shaming feel that much more sinful but alluring. I also like the pov’s from Naruko and Menma in this chapter too, especially like seeing Naruko’s willingness to be submissive to Sasuke grow further. I’m still enjoying the seals being used as well. I’m open to any inclusion of abilities/lore/tools from the naruto world in general, as long as it’s written well really. Keep up the great work! Looking forward to your next one
Food&LiquorTrack2
2024-02-08 05:35:49 +0000 UTCAizen
2024-02-02 14:10:08 +0000 UTCSuper hot! I'd love to see Hinata tease Naruto/Menma like that!
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