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Menma's Fetish - Chapter 12

Good evening! I sincerely hope you all had a very pleasant Easter.

I've been keeping busy, as I'm sure you guys saw with last month's post. That SasuKushi story was a blast to write! I'm glad that many of you enjoyed it. Of course, I would hate to keep you guys waiting for more of that, but alas, I also want to make sure you guys get your usual update of Menma's Fetish, too.

This chapter...well, let's just say that I expect it to be somewhat controversial. I had a great time writing it, though! I can say with confidence that, like it or hate it, this is a chapter you cannot miss if you've read the previous eleven chapters.

Now enjoy! As always, let me know what you think.

Chapter XII

Previous chapters:

Chapter I
Chapter II
Chapter III
Chapter IV
Chapter V
Chapter VI
Chapter VII
Chapter VIII
Chapter IX
Chapter X
Chapter XI

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P.S.

I intend to put up a poll to gauge what content you guys would like to see next! Keep an eye out for that to drop soon, or be sure to head over and vote if it's already released by the time you're reading this!

Comments

Yo, another banger, loved the dinner scene with the “normalization” of the situation, wished kushina teased Menma a little more thou. On board with the episodic continuation (we need the beach episode), a bit less with merging the universes, but you do you.

Aizen

Thanks for the chapter, sorry for the late reply! Had a really busy week, so this was refreshing to read. The smut was great as usual, and I loved seeing the different reactions from Kushina and Naruko. This was a good, balanced way of using the shadow clone jutsu here. Admittedly I’m not a big fan of shadow clones in smut because I feel that it waters down intimacy when it’s overdone; but it worked out well since there were only 2 clones, and it created different experiences for the girls. I respect the decision to end the main story here since the main objectives were cleared, but I’m glad you still have plans to revisit this world again! I really want to see how Himawari interacts with a young Sasuke (in appearance), and if you have any plans for the Uchiha family or other characters as well. Looking forward to the next update!

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