max 1 (rework
Added 2017-10-19 20:49:29 +0000 UTCa friend proposed me to correct the english text, and i took the opportunity to solve and correct a lot of details i didn't liked in Max body,
So here is the rework
But the vote is still here:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/max-cyoa-serie-14944861
